!Why you should not smoke!
Have you ever smoked before? Well, if you have, you should know that it is very bad for you.
Why we should not smoke, we should not smoke because smoking causes lung cancer and you can die from that anyway, so what's the point of having a cigarette or a vape when they can cause death.
Another reason why we should not smoke is because it’s bad for the environment and you can spend up to thousands of dollars every year and you can lose lots of money from something you don't even need to survive.
The last reason why we should not smoke is because it affects our oxygen and it can affect our mental health and our health.
-Summary-
We should not smoke because it's bad for the environment and its pollution. We don't need it to survive so there's no point we can lose lots of money and lose our jobs and you won’t have a good reputation when you try to get a job.Have I persuaded you to not smoke ?
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ReplyDeleteIḿ Mia
I Definitely agree with you that no one should smoke. I think you did a good job making your writing really persuasive. It reminded me that you should never smoke. Next time you could maybe add a bit more to you introduction.
What made you want to write about this topic?
-Mia