Kia ora, welcome back to my blog for this weeks reading create we had to make something about friends and I made a poem. the poem is a rhyming poem about friends I hope you like it and enjoy reading. :)
What friend poems do you know ?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Kia ora, welcome back to my blog for this weeks reading create we had to make something about friends and I made a poem. the poem is a rhyming poem about friends I hope you like it and enjoy reading. :)
What friend poems do you know ?
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Kia Ora Ella,
ReplyDeleteI love your poem it is so thoughtful and the font also looks amazing! I like how you added a simile, and how you compered your friends with your family. Maybe next time you could add some add slightly more sentences in your poem.
-Georgia